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Silent Magician Admin
Posts : 282 Join date : 2012-01-07 Age : 29 Location : USA
| Subject: Re: Finding my way Sat Jan 28, 2012 11:58 pm | |
| queen u should keep writing ^^ | |
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Blader_Lexi Admin
Posts : 288 Join date : 2012-01-07 Age : 25 Location : Philippines
| Subject: Re: Finding my way Sun Jan 29, 2012 12:13 am | |
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.:Optimus Prime:. Apprentice Dorm
Posts : 206 Join date : 2012-01-13 Age : 30 Location : America
| Subject: Re: Finding my way Sun Jan 29, 2012 12:16 am | |
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Blader_Lexi Admin
Posts : 288 Join date : 2012-01-07 Age : 25 Location : Philippines
| Subject: Re: Finding my way Sun Jan 29, 2012 12:18 am | |
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Silent Magician Admin
Posts : 282 Join date : 2012-01-07 Age : 29 Location : USA
| Subject: Re: Finding my way Sun Jan 29, 2012 12:55 am | |
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Blader_Lexi Admin
Posts : 288 Join date : 2012-01-07 Age : 25 Location : Philippines
| Subject: Re: Finding my way Sun Jan 29, 2012 3:14 am | |
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Queen of the Cards Admin
Posts : 78 Join date : 2012-01-19 Age : 30
| Subject: Re: Finding my way Fri Feb 17, 2012 3:52 am | |
| EPIC...STROYS OF HITROY!!!!!
A women’s war
As I packed my duel Decks Silent texted me. “WAIT WHY ARE YOU LEAVEING!?” I texted back that I killed a man…I’m not me…I need time to think. She texted read. “ Let me come with you!” I respned “ No” she Texted “ GOD DANM IT MAY I ALOMEST LOST YOU TO DAY I DON’T WANT TO LOSSE YOU AGAIN!!!” I had to to this for her own good…who knows what I might do next…. “ Silent” I answerd. “I need to do this by myself….” “But the War!” I said Good bye and truned off my phone.
As I walked out of the main Gate Silent and Lixe was no waer to be found. I looked as people looked at me scared of me…this is not what I wanted at all. As I walk out A Girl about 3 yaers yunger walked up to me and handed me back pack full of food. I tried to give it back but she ran of trund and said. “ plez come back some time!” I will never for get that Girl with the long Blond hair and sweet green eyes.
50 mitest in my walk I saw something in the sky comeing at me I was in shock of what it was. It was a moter haed! And it hit the gound be hind me Explonding and lanching my at lest 3 feet in the air. As soon as I hit the ground I hurd gun shots I look up and I see a Flag with the leters TDA and On the other side of the plians a flag that read DDA. I stude up and A man Takled me looked at me and said. “You Dark dule Acadumy Scume!” Thin it hit me this is the war Silent was talking about and he think I’m the Enumy. He tried to punch me I move my head and use my legs to push him up and did a Shawn Mieals kik up and landed on my feet. I showed him the TDA Pass I got from Silent. When He saw that he tossed me a Rifle and said. “shot the other guys!” I did as told I aimed the gun and as I did I saw something that made me sick I saw Phoenix.
“HOW!? I KILLED HIM!!!” I aimed and Shot him in the sholder he looked at me and Screamed. “ WHAT THE HELL!?...YOU A PIAN IN THE ASS!” and Fired at me with his pilstle and he him me in the Right leg the pain was Grate but I was still standing For the love of god I don’t know how Phoenix saw this thin ignored me shoting more TDA members. I aimed and shot meany men no Girls are on the battle fealed with I fond odd but I shot. I remember haering Phoenix Yelling “ Fall back! We got what we want Fall Back!” the TDA members shoted in Vitctery and thin the woned was talken care of I took one step and fell to the guoned and two men saw me and rushed to me looked at my face thaer eyes grew big and thay took me to a tent. As thay looked at my leg treting it I examped thim. The one on the left was a skiny one but I cloud tell he has killed in the past looked happy not that hes happy that I’m hurt but that she’s aolwas happy. The one on the left was looking at my face thin back at my leg shyly with maid me act shyly. The Happy one had brown hair so did the shy one. Thay both had Brown eyes. But the Shy ones wher Lither. The one on the right said. “ I’m L” ponted to the shy one “that’s Fuse” And pointed at me” You May Silents Ex…she Texted me to wach over you so I will” DANM IT SILENT! I thot to myself. Now I’m a part of this War. Thin a man walked in the tent in shock. “What the hell is she doing haer!?” the man asked, L answerd. Getting shot at like the rest of us” the man said. “no NO! NO WEMON ON THE BATTLE FEALED!” L said Oders Form Silent…you fight the ranks let see who wins: The man Yelled. “ GET HER TO MY TENT WHENS SHES READY!” and left angery. “ Fuse said. May….I’m sorry for him…he…” L buted in raping up my leg. “ that’s Genrul Goyo…he lost his Wife in the war….was shot by a sniper…he dosnt want wemon on the battle fealed because he don’t want the other men felling the pain he did.” Haering thin maid me wonder what he wanted to talk to me about.
“Ok” L said your ok…now the one on your solder…you need to talk off your shirt you ok with that” I shuck my haed as Fuse said. “L you don’t need to talk off her shirt to bandge it…” L looked at fuse and Sighed. “ some time I sawer your Gay man” and he taped gose on the bandges. And said you need to talk to Goyo now…Good luck May”
As I lemed in the tent he saw me and said. “ no no no you won’t do you go bsck to TDA and tell thim we need real men not you!” Hearing this made me angry. He saw that and said. “You want to fight…?” no I thot I need to…I need to kill Phoenix. I noded and he saw something in my eyes and said. Ok…you sleep in my tent be thar by 9 pm” I was in shock he saw and said. “Every solger shaers a tent your not Spieshe…thin again all my tent mates Die….Let see how long you last…you all ready got hit twice…you wont last long” that set my fuse I got in his face And he yelled at me as I used my hand to yell at him for 2 hours we did this thin he yelled. “ YOU RED EYES ARE CUTE!” shoeked at what he said I said nothing( you know what I mean). He was schoked to…thin he said. “ thay do..” as he rubed my check… and He kissed me. When he did My knees got week I closed my eyes and Felt his lipes I felt A warms wave go thro my body. He’s hand rubed my sholder and thin my breast thin his hand reached my stumick as we wlour interubted my a moter shell hiting the gouned and was soon as it did he yelled out> BATTLE STATIONS!” he tolded my a bow with arrows and said” that’s all we got…” “ your on the Frunt line.
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Queen of the Cards Admin
Posts : 78 Join date : 2012-01-19 Age : 30
| Subject: Re: Finding my way Sat Feb 18, 2012 12:34 pm | |
| Yay!!!!! no ones readying...
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.:Optimus Prime:. Apprentice Dorm
Posts : 206 Join date : 2012-01-13 Age : 30 Location : America
| Subject: Re: Finding my way Sat Feb 18, 2012 1:46 pm | |
| I'm reading | |
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Queen of the Cards Admin
Posts : 78 Join date : 2012-01-19 Age : 30
| Subject: Re: Finding my way Sat Feb 18, 2012 2:40 pm | |
| TY!!! | |
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KillerBee
Posts : 30 Join date : 2012-01-25 Location : Hidden Cloud
| Subject: Re: Finding my way Sat Feb 18, 2012 7:52 pm | |
| and yeah i thought L will participate ... ahhh L you've reached the reputation of Brad Pitt .... ^_^ laughing ...... ._. poker face ...... WHAT THE FUCK | |
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Blader_Lexi Admin
Posts : 288 Join date : 2012-01-07 Age : 25 Location : Philippines
| Subject: Re: Finding my way Tue Feb 21, 2012 6:13 am | |
| - Queen of the Cards wrote:
- Yay!!!!! no ones readying...
lol I just read it now, great job ^^ | |
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Queen of the Cards Admin
Posts : 78 Join date : 2012-01-19 Age : 30
| Subject: Re: Finding my way Tue Feb 21, 2012 10:37 am | |
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L.Lawliet
Posts : 45 Join date : 2012-01-21
| Subject: Re: Finding my way Tue Feb 21, 2012 2:20 pm | |
| - KillerBee wrote:
- and yeah i thought L will participate ... ahhh L you've reached the reputation of Brad Pitt .... ^_^ laughing ...... ._. poker face ...... WHAT THE FUCK
hahaha ^^ And I love it queen, great job | |
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DarkPhoenixFlare
Posts : 32 Join date : 2012-01-13
| Subject: Re: Finding my way Thu Feb 23, 2012 1:01 am | |
| - Queen of the Cards wrote:
- Yay!!!!! no ones readying...
i read it and im a baws with a pistol and you are just bent on killing me arent you? | |
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Queen of the Cards Admin
Posts : 78 Join date : 2012-01-19 Age : 30
| Subject: Re: Finding my way Thu Feb 23, 2012 3:11 pm | |
| XD I was walking, some one gives me a fucking gun A GUN, and I see a dead man shoting ppl what the hell wloud you do? XD | |
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DarkPhoenixFlare
Posts : 32 Join date : 2012-01-13
| Subject: Re: Finding my way Thu Feb 23, 2012 9:25 pm | |
| - Queen of the Cards wrote:
- XD I was walking, some one gives me a fucking gun A GUN, and I see a dead man shoting ppl what the hell wloud you do? XD
XD i would be like what the fuck is he like a zombie | |
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Blader_Lexi Admin
Posts : 288 Join date : 2012-01-07 Age : 25 Location : Philippines
| Subject: Re: Finding my way Fri Feb 24, 2012 4:41 am | |
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KillerBee
Posts : 30 Join date : 2012-01-25 Location : Hidden Cloud
| Subject: Re: Finding my way Fri Feb 24, 2012 8:38 am | |
| Im going to grab the pistol .... throw it away and get my bazooka ... | |
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Queen of the Cards Admin
Posts : 78 Join date : 2012-01-19 Age : 30
| Subject: Re: Finding my way Mon Feb 27, 2012 4:28 am | |
| On the other side
I cloud haer the oders loed and clear Aim, shot, kill. Haering this is not something I’m used to haering And a nuther thang that stack me odd is. Why did I not haer the sound of war in the wall of the academy? And How did phoenix life?! I killed him with my own to hands! Well….I his neack with one but you know. WAIT!!! Goyo that the name that Lexi said was on Phoenix side!!! All of this new info was making my haed spin and my I could not see strat…I need to sit down or I’ll the last thang I saw was My body hiting the gouroned and darknes.
My sleep was interrupted by a man saying. “ma’am get up we need you to fight” that man Was Fuse the shy boy. I look up to see him close to my face thin I genlyly push him off and got to my feet. “we need you on the frunt line ma’am.” Something seemed off about him but I followed him to the trench he said Goyo was in but when I jumped in I was grabed by two guys my arms I cloud not move. Thin out of the shadow I saw him thar was Phoenix red hair scar on his face. He said to fuse. “you did well in my New world Oder you can have enyslave you want even silent but not Lexi she’ll be mine” THE TRADER!!!! He’s working for PHOEIX! THAT ASS!!!!!. “but May Mite be the one I’ll pic” said phoenix . “But why her?” asked fuse. When fuse asked Phoenix looked at fuse like he was sikend by what he has just asked. “ARE YOU BLINED!? LOOK AT HER!! Her musules are just the right size for a girl and her brest are big not as bit as silents but thel work and the nicest ass I have her seen I mean I would hit that” he was trying to flater me it almost woked till I rememberd who He was a murderer he was an ass and I was not going to let him tuch mine. “ok” said phoenix “taker her away to my room I’ll deal with her thar” Wait deal WHAT IS HE GOING TO DO TO ME!? I had a opening I had to take it! As the gards moved I was ablou to brake free grabe my bow get aan arrow loded aim and let it fly. It hit the target As the arrow hit his throt he he fell dead in his own blood fuse was lying dead on the ground. As phoenix was shocked he looked at me as I let the men grabe my hands. “why did you not shot me?” he asked…I mothed the words “…I don’t know…” as the men cared me off I looked back at phoenix not wating to look away…I keept telling my self so I know waer he is. Befor the men put a sack over my head I look up and down phoenix looking for eny sine of a neck ingery…nun!....
As the men thru me in a truk I’m gusseing I was thinking of phoenix….so to stop my self I strating thinking of goyo how could he have been at two places at once? Same so for phoenix…unless…thar waer impaoster now one for phoenix I could understand…but why one for goyo…It maid no sens and why did Lexi want me gone if I did not past the test? Well I’m gone now….and what the hell dose silent see in me. Leaving her hurt me more thin enythang I have ever done…. And why waer this amazing people making ther life around me? And something that may never get answerd….why are my eyes Red!? I somehow fell asleep no dream just darknes untell I awaoke in phoenix room
Not much there no windose canduls leght a bed King size and I was tied to it with no clothing on. My eyes widened and I was freeking out know what was to come next My thoughts wher flying NO NOT AGAIN!!!! As I was pulling on the chains GOD DAMIT NO NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!! NOT AGAIN!!!! PLEZ SOME ONE SAVE ME!!!!!!! Thin he walked in. with no shirt on or pants just boxers this maid me more scard as I pulled on the chains. Awww you don’t like the new seting?” he said with a evil look on his face. “now lets get you somthning to drink” he gave me a glass of wine being thrusty I thot I had no chose I had to do what he wanted…. “thar you go girl now Let me set one thang strat I’m not going to rap you you’ll do it because you want to k?” I laghed when I hurd this but thin something happned I started getting wet as it got wosre he said. “the drug works ever time…May I love you…but your on ther side….ever sens I frist laid my eyes on you…I want to do nothing but kiss thos lips….I did not want it to haapen this way..but May…I’ll make you happy…that’s all I want my May flaower” he bent down and kissed me and I injoyed it.
As he kissed me he let his hands wonder to my brest he rubs my right one and pinched my left nipple as the plusher shot thro my body I got even more wet thin he stoped kissing me and licked my check and my neck and sucked on my right nipple and let he left hand wonder down to my wet pussy as he faigerd me I was tiching and moning in plusher. He stoped stud up and pulled his boxer down and his dick poped out it was biger thin I tho at lest 7 inches (don’t get a big ego kid) as the drug did it’s job I cloud not resest. I licked his dick up and down he mond as gently as my lick where and thin I started to suck on the head. He tiched and moned as I did and as I slowly took move of his cock in my moth felling in and tasting it on my tunge he mond more and placed his hands on my haed as I went as untell his intier cock was in my mouth. And thin I went back a little and thin I went back fowerd and I repeted this motion and a past that maid phoenix mone lodly afther 3 mitse he yelled “I’M GOING TO CUM!” as he did he held my haed maeking me sallow every drop. “Now how do you fell?” he asked as I looked up at him I looked down shyly and thin I did it.
I sung up and kiked him in the face he stagerd back and fell to the floor and I was ables to find a pair of jens and slid thos on fast no time for a shirt and right thar I saw it phoenix with a pistol aimed at me and said. “ I love you…but…” thin he fierd. I don’t know why but I thin claped my hand and thin pladed thim on the ground and it maid a dome around him and I hird a scream as I ran out the door and out of the bileden with no one around I ran for 2 hours thin I was walking like the walking dead and I saw a friendly face It was L and 4 men He saw me and he eyes widend see the condition I was in he ran to me as I fell in his arms he yelled “MEDICE!!!” thin looked at me and said soflty. “it’s ok you back home” and thin I fainted now I was safe once again. | |
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KillerBee
Posts : 30 Join date : 2012-01-25 Location : Hidden Cloud
| Subject: Re: Finding my way Mon Feb 27, 2012 8:24 am | |
| I like the dialect it is written in ... it makes it even more interesting and you know it gives you this feeling like instead of just reading an ordinary text , its like someone you know, someone close to you is telliing you this story and you experience what he thought, what he did, what he said ... i don' know that's how i feel when reading it. As always great story, looking forward for more Writing is the best way to talk without being interrupted | |
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L.Lawliet
Posts : 45 Join date : 2012-01-21
| Subject: Re: Finding my way Mon Feb 27, 2012 8:59 am | |
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Queen of the Cards Admin
Posts : 78 Join date : 2012-01-19 Age : 30
| Subject: Re: Finding my way Mon Feb 27, 2012 2:56 pm | |
| thank you guys and It's all thanx to TDA if it ok you guys get the point now worship me like the fan fic god I em XD lolz | |
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KillerBee
Posts : 30 Join date : 2012-01-25 Location : Hidden Cloud
| Subject: Re: Finding my way Mon Feb 27, 2012 5:14 pm | |
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Queen of the Cards Admin
Posts : 78 Join date : 2012-01-19 Age : 30
| Subject: Re: Finding my way Wed Feb 29, 2012 10:21 am | |
| Why are you thanking him? =o | |
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