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Queen of the Cards Admin
Posts : 78 Join date : 2012-01-19 Age : 30
| Subject: Re: Finding my way Wed Feb 29, 2012 10:26 am | |
| - KillerBee wrote:
- I like the dialect it is written in ... it makes it even more interesting and you know it gives you this feeling like instead of just reading an ordinary text , its like someone you know, someone close to you is telliing you this story and you experience what he thought, what he did, what he said ... i don' know that's how i feel when reading it. As always great story, looking forward for more.
Yes thank you for saying so it means a lot and I'm trying to come out with ones every sunday but I need your guys help Every time you see me say Got the new chap done if not work a littli on the Be anaoying! I know some of you can do that. | |
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L.Lawliet
Posts : 45 Join date : 2012-01-21
| Subject: Re: Finding my way Wed Feb 29, 2012 4:18 pm | |
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.:Optimus Prime:. Apprentice Dorm
Posts : 206 Join date : 2012-01-13 Age : 30 Location : America
| Subject: Re: Finding my way Wed Feb 29, 2012 8:57 pm | |
| Great job Queen! Keep it coming. | |
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Queen of the Cards Admin
Posts : 78 Join date : 2012-01-19 Age : 30
| Subject: Re: Finding my way Mon Mar 05, 2012 4:17 am | |
| The NTR
As I awoke It was in a tent with I pink covering I thout what the fuck is up with the pink…? I saw L thar and said. “O you’re awake…How are you?” I said nothing thinking of what phoenix did to me how cloud enyone do that to a nuther human?....He asked “do you like the pink tent?” “ yea I love it as much as getting shot” O MY MUTHER…I don’t have a mom….WAIT THAT’S NOT THE PIONT I JUST SPOKE JESSUES” “I SPOKE!” L said. “yea…people tend to do tha…O yea I forgot you could not…sorry…But you can now!” I asked “ AND HOW THE FUCK IT THIS!?!?” “O” L said “ I gave you a coler…you see the volcer corse wher viberating to softly so this coller reads it and says it” O…well that explanes the Robottek Femal voice… “ May Goyo wants to see you when you can walk” L said. Fuck…now what…
As I walk in to Goyos tent he was Smokeing from a pipe He must have got it from the wast land ofter the grat war in the U.S fell and Dueling became the new palutics. Now the Grate U.S.A Is one grate wast land with only about 5 starts with Wood life are is one. Not tribes or Duel Acadumys Run the Stats and I guesse TDA if Faceing A nuther one Phoenis is leading for control of St.Lius and the arch. Goyo looked up and said. “ are you ok…?” I answerd with a yes. “So it works….L is worth something…May I need to know something right now….Whos side are you on Ares Or the Acadamys…?” Wow…I had think for a sec and I answerd. “the Armys” Goyo said. “good” now come haer all of the other men now you learn with Silent and Lexi. We’er going to talk to thim? The higher ups? Wanting to know whats going on I followed him to a Gient room with a huge computer minuter and Ther thay waer Silent and Lexi In Lexi offes talking to silent about sumthing when Goyo said. “Ladys” Lexi and Silent saw me and said at the same time. “OMG MAY!!! HOW ARE YOU!?!?” I asnwerd “I em fine” Silent And Lexi wher both speech les at me talking till thay saw my coler and said. “OMG WE CAN TALK NOW!!!” “LADYS!” Goyo yelled wich scared me but not Silent and Lexi thay just got to the point. “what is it?” Lexi asked. Goyo said. “ you need real fighter Lexi….” Lexi sighed and said. “We can’t take take the time to train thim” “no” Goyo “not for us for you” Me silent and lexi wher cunffused. Goyo pulled a pustule out and pineted it two the screan and said. “From now on thim army of 3,387 men and this butifuel Women Are not longer the Dogs of TDA we are The New Tiliwte Repupli!” and he shot the srean” looked at me and said. “May…If you want to go back to TDA I understand I wont force you to stay…But I wloud love it if you did. I said. “Can I have some time to think about it?” “Sure” Goyo said. “But I need to now by sun set” “ok I said as I walked out and back to my tent
The rest of the 4 houres I sepent talking to L and wondering what I sude do On one hand I get to see Silent and be safe on the other I fight Kill Phoenix and make this state a beater one I mean Idk what to do! But thin it hit me. I went to Goyos tent and looked at him doing paper work at his desk he looked up and said. “ o Hello May have you desied?” I said “Yes” “ok” Goyo said. “which side to you pic?” Ok haer it is thes next words deside my fate for the rest of my life… Thin I said it. “I pic….”
TO BE CONTENUED! | |
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Queen of the Cards Admin
Posts : 78 Join date : 2012-01-19 Age : 30
| Subject: Re: Finding my way Mon Mar 05, 2012 4:19 am | |
| Guys I;m sorry this ones short it's just that I'm adickdted to this Game called Fallout new vages And untill I bet it I mite not make thim as long but Interesting all ready got book 1 fishesed in my haed but Now I'm working on book 2 in my haed XD so I hope you enjoy.
~WITH LOVE TO ALL MY READERS. May Lyan Wuten. | |
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KillerBee
Posts : 30 Join date : 2012-01-25 Location : Hidden Cloud
| Subject: Re: Finding my way Mon Mar 05, 2012 7:57 am | |
| hmm again briliant ... waiting for the next one | |
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DarkPhoenixFlare
Posts : 32 Join date : 2012-01-13
| Subject: Re: Finding my way Wed Mar 07, 2012 12:15 am | |
| - KillerBee wrote:
- hmm again briliant ... waiting for the next one
bee first of all obviously its brilliant it was made by her and second of all keep waiting shes not gonna give you a new one every day give her time she has a life. btw queenie i <3 you | |
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KillerBee
Posts : 30 Join date : 2012-01-25 Location : Hidden Cloud
| Subject: Re: Finding my way Wed Mar 07, 2012 1:28 pm | |
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- btw queenie i <3 you
You know what they say - "One word frees us of all the weight and pain in life. That word is love." ... PRO ... that's why they call me the player | |
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Queen of the Cards Admin
Posts : 78 Join date : 2012-01-19 Age : 30
| Subject: Re: Finding my way Wed Mar 07, 2012 7:21 pm | |
| Ok I bet new vages So I can wright a lil more ~Love May | |
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DarkPhoenixFlare
Posts : 32 Join date : 2012-01-13
| Subject: Re: Finding my way Wed Mar 07, 2012 8:49 pm | |
| - KillerBee wrote:
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- Quote :
- btw queenie i <3 you
You know what they say - "One word frees us of all the weight and pain in life. That word is love." ... PRO ... that's why they call me the player they call u the player? i thought they called u the retard | |
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Queen of the Cards Admin
Posts : 78 Join date : 2012-01-19 Age : 30
| Subject: Re: Finding my way Thu Mar 08, 2012 1:18 am | |
| omg you known i wish i cloud give this book a sonud trake to when you read you haer the music it wloud be aswome. | |
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Blader_Lexi Admin
Posts : 288 Join date : 2012-01-07 Age : 25 Location : Philippines
| Subject: Re: Finding my way Thu Mar 08, 2012 7:10 am | |
| just keep it coming, I love your story ^^ | |
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KillerBee
Posts : 30 Join date : 2012-01-25 Location : Hidden Cloud
| Subject: Re: Finding my way Thu Mar 08, 2012 8:05 am | |
| tolololololo ... you never understand the jokes ... and you call me retard :X | |
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L.Lawliet
Posts : 45 Join date : 2012-01-21
| Subject: Re: Finding my way Fri Mar 09, 2012 4:19 am | |
| Interesting how do I not get any ass in this fic xD But joke from a side, good job queenie, it's getting better and better | |
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.:Optimus Prime:. Apprentice Dorm
Posts : 206 Join date : 2012-01-13 Age : 30 Location : America
| Subject: Re: Finding my way Sun Mar 11, 2012 1:26 pm | |
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Queen of the Cards Admin
Posts : 78 Join date : 2012-01-19 Age : 30
| Subject: Re: Finding my way Mon Mar 12, 2012 1:54 am | |
| One yaer.
“I chose to stay”When I said that Goyo stude up came over hugged me and said. “Good we need you” Now you get a rifel one se- *BANG* Goyo tosted a Rifle at my and as I coute it he yelled . “BATTLE STATIONS!!!!!” as I walked out sure enuf thar was Phoenix I took my rifle and aimed not at phoenix a random enumy I can’t find the heart to shot him I don’t know why. I remember seeing a lot og bodys droop and I saw men drop as I shot them. After 30-35 mitiest of fighting the wind piced up a lot thin I looked up and I saw a helochapter in the sky with TDA on the side the men of the NTR just stude thar waching as the chapter landed and at lest 100 men came out with more updated guns and in less thin 30 sec the enumy was gone. Phoenix was thar in shock and I cloud see him moth in shock. “the…the brotherhood of steel” thar wher mursunares the did ENY thang you told thim as long as thay got paid. Thin I saw phoenix aim at some one and shot his pistole befor some of the NTR ran up to Phoenix and I was haering “HES HIT HE’S NOT BRETHING!” I look over to see Goyo on the ground being taken away on a stretcher. I ran up to goyo seeing him asleep looked dead but was brething. L came up to me and told me he was shot and that he put for some reson me in charg until he get beater. So thin I look at the Chopter and I see Silent And Lexi walk out seeing Lixe Holding a wip looking vary happy and told me to meet her in the middle of the camp.
So I did what she said as the men gatherd arong and I suted on a plat fome abut 12 feet long and weth (sorry not good at judgment trums) and with ropes and thinking back seeing some tapes befor the war I thinks it’s a wrelting ring but not too sure tho. I saw Lexi and Silent walk thro the ropes and walk up to me Silent thros me a Mic and starts to say. “Now now Ik you guys think it’s cool to Call your self the NTR but it’s got to end now!” “no I said” Silent and Lexi looked at me and and Silent said. “May…you’re a trader!” I yelled back in to the mic. “ NO I’M NOT!....You gave me a place to life a place wher I was peddted and still labled as a freek…haer I’m May Lyn Wuten” Lexi buted in “Silent tell her” Silent talked again. “I was going to fight Goyo and the if Goyo won The NTR wloud life on if I won I wloud destroy the NTR” I said “I’ll fight” And silent laghed and said. “ you can’t fight me I’ll win” I said. “no Not you!” I kicked Silent in the gut and thro her out of the ring when she hit the grouned and looked shoked I look Lexi In the eyes and Siad. “I’ll fight you” she smiled and said. “ In one yaer…The NTD fell fall.
12s left till the Mach of the Ages | |
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Queen of the Cards Admin
Posts : 78 Join date : 2012-01-19 Age : 30
| Subject: Re: Finding my way Mon Mar 12, 2012 1:54 am | |
| I want to posted a slide show on haer how do I do that? | |
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KillerBee
Posts : 30 Join date : 2012-01-25 Location : Hidden Cloud
| Subject: Re: Finding my way Mon Mar 12, 2012 7:21 am | |
| and yup it's really good again :3 ..... in order to make it in slide show you have to either make a flash swf. or movie clip ... there is also a way to anime it in photoshop as gif. but the easiest way is to find in Google a free slideshow making website ... thumbs up if i helped | |
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Blader_Lexi Admin
Posts : 288 Join date : 2012-01-07 Age : 25 Location : Philippines
| Subject: Re: Finding my way Mon Mar 12, 2012 8:16 am | |
| well you could use movie maker then convert it to a video then upload in photobucket and then post here the link ^^ | |
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Queen of the Cards Admin
Posts : 78 Join date : 2012-01-19 Age : 30
| Subject: Re: Finding my way Mon Mar 12, 2012 4:51 pm | |
| Hey Finding my way fans I'm going to let you wright. Yes you all are in the fic but I'm going to let you right your own back story the best one well b in the next Chapster pm thim my haer i'll pic when I want to so no do date just tipe fast ~Love May the Queen of Cards. | |
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DarkPhoenixFlare
Posts : 32 Join date : 2012-01-13
| Subject: Re: Finding my way Mon Mar 12, 2012 9:15 pm | |
| cool contest beautiful but i dont think other people can be as perfect as you | |
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Queen of the Cards Admin
Posts : 78 Join date : 2012-01-19 Age : 30
| Subject: Re: Finding my way Mon Mar 12, 2012 10:01 pm | |
| Awwwwwwwwwwwww thank you. | |
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.:Optimus Prime:. Apprentice Dorm
Posts : 206 Join date : 2012-01-13 Age : 30 Location : America
| Subject: Re: Finding my way Tue Mar 13, 2012 11:39 am | |
| Omg woooooooo! even though i have yet to seen me yay! | |
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KillerBee
Posts : 30 Join date : 2012-01-25 Location : Hidden Cloud
| Subject: Re: Finding my way Tue Mar 13, 2012 1:28 pm | |
| ahahhah Opti will be the bad guy who wants to overtake the world and im going to assist him our group will be named The Dark Star .. LOL joking | |
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DarkPhoenixFlare
Posts : 32 Join date : 2012-01-13
| Subject: Re: Finding my way Tue Mar 13, 2012 3:57 pm | |
| dark star? is this star wars or sumin
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